- The fonts need a greater degree of consistency. - captions should be the same size - pugs/byline should be the same size - The body text would be better if it was serif - And it needs to be better aligned.
The image of the phone/cup is not very good - there are better shots in your film that one.
Also something like 'SHORTS!' might be a better heading for the sectiion rather than 'Short Film Review'.
Finally the placement of the star rating does not meet the conventions.
This is a good start but it needs work.
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- captions should be the same size
- pugs/byline should be the same size
- The body text would be better if it was serif
- And it needs to be better aligned.
The image of the phone/cup is not very good - there are better shots in your film that one.
Also something like 'SHORTS!' might be a better heading for the sectiion rather than 'Short Film Review'.
Finally the placement of the star rating does not meet the conventions.